Day by day my mind stays on you,
I can't seem to pull away.
Everything that comes and goes,
it brings me back to you.
All I can think about is what was,
and now what I wish still could be,
but it cant, because it's over.
It's all slipped from my reach.
The further you got away,
the more you ripped me apart.
With nothing to fill the spaces,
I'm left in pieces.
Yet no one can fix what you've done,
nothing can put me back together.
Only you could glue me back,
back to the way things were.
Yet you won't because you can't seem to see,
all the darkness around me now.
Because of you I’ve fallen for good,
and without you,
being put back together,
is out
of the question.
Your poem puts such a strong image of your feelings about this person, even though you do not specify who it is. Great job!
ReplyDeleteWow, this really goes deep into detail about how you feel towards this someone, really great job!
ReplyDeleteThis poem is super deep and I get a really good picture in my head of what you are feeling. Nice job!
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